Learner response to Ignite – feedback was lost. No WWW/EBI – need to go back and add this. Score out of 20 was 6. Also need a paragraph linking it to your critical investigation. This is extremely worrying.
Critical Investigation proposal – poor. There is no evidence you have put right the lack of thought and effort into your Ignite presentation. The question does not mention your media text – such a basic error. Hypothesis doesn’t exist.
Linked production – needs some thought but will work.
Not much by way of MIGRAIN research – copy in the rest of your summer project research (at least what is relevant). Make sure there is some textual analysis from the film - if not, put it in your research plan!
For SHEP – you’ve actually got some good stuff that will be valuable for the investigation. However, it is basic bullet points and you will need to expand these ideas significantly and link specifically to the text.
For issues/debates, you definitely need to add Media Effects – very relevant to this essay.
Theories disappointing – no notes linking to your ideas or text.
For the research plan, you’ve got a solid start. Copy it into your Notes and Quotes document but before doing any research do some more on the research plan.
Publish this on your blog with your next steps in this project.
- Re-write my title and add my two films i will be analysing
- Write a strong hypothesis
- Add more to my MIGRAIN points
- Expand on my SHEP points
- Add to my theories - say how they link to my issue and text
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